Blood-chilling. This is a wicked story and I love it. I
usually am not one for Were stories, but this intrigued me. Done very well, it
leaves me on edge. Thrilling. Keeps me hooked and reading. I love the plot,
seems very original.
Overall it is well written. A few spelling and grammatical
mishaps, but nothing of major concern. The three-year old, Rose seems to
articulate herself too well for a three-year old. I feel she is out of
character. Before her age was revealed I presumed her to be a six-year old.
Twice her age so I suggest the author work on delivering characters. And
organization.
I can say I like this story in the least. It is interesting,
something fresh and I feel it will go far as the plot unfolds. Something new
and weird is my cup of tea. Of course that is my opinion, I just so happen to
write a paranormal romance as well. So I hope my reviews don’t become biased. Trying
to review this with an open-mind, I believe this story needs work overall, but
the plot alone makes up for everything. That is all I have to say.
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