The title isn’t the only thing catchy about this short
story. Without a doubt this author is amazingly talented. A great gift for
writing that it’s truly admirable. This short story may have not had a real
plot to it, but the writing style alone kept me hooked. It is delivered so well
that I couldn’t find a thing really wrong with it. For a first written work,
it’s amazing.
I’d personally like to see this author do something more. A
real novel or a short story filled with a thicker plot. I hate seeing so much
talent going to waste. The spelling, grammar, pacing and the way it was
delivered all seem to check out to be done so professionally.
At first I didn’t feel like reading a short story, I want to
see an author putting all their effort into one piece of work. At least if it’s
a short story, I want to see it filled with a good, thick plot. I didn’t find
that in this story, but I found a talented author. That I hope I would see
published one day… if that is his desire. I hope so. Sad seeing talent wasted.
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