The plot is great, ingenious. Who doesn’t love a story about
robots taking over the world? The action is awesome, well written there; it is
an amazing sci-fi thriller, filled with mystery and some romance. I feel this
story could go far…
However, I didn’t find this story professional at all.
Nor was it organized. This story honestly gets confusing. Third person I like
to read, but the author does not do a good job at pulling it off. If this story
had some major editing it could win a watty award no doubt. In its current
state… not a chance.
You cannot just have a good plot alone. You have to have
grammar, correct spelling, organization, good description and pacing. This
story only seems to have a great plot, nothing more. As much as I could enjoy
this story, I really don’t want to read it because it is so disorganized,
little effort put into it. I recommend it if you want a robot takeover, sci-fi
read and only read it if you don’t mind major writing errors.
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