This story is wicked. I love the ingenious plot, it may seem
like a X-men or Sky High rip-off to most people, but I appreciate the
originality I do see. I recommend this to all. I personally love this story.
The only thing I didn’t like about the story was the main
character’s name… Asterisk… Isn’t that what this * is? At least
the author pointed that out in the story. Oh well, don’t let that shallow
critique stop you from reading this. I definitely want to read on with this story
and recommend it to all who are into the super-girl kind of stories.
So now in all seriousness, the only mistake I find is minor
grammar and spelling, slight lack of description and mainly, that I believe the
author should have done this story in first person. Sometimes it switches from
third person to first person and that gets confusing. I don’t care what
perspective the author decides to do, just pick one and stick with it.
Overall this story impressed me. It is delivered very well
and I appreciate the hard effort, admire the author’s talent and look forward
to more. If you are looking for a story about mutant kids with special
abilities, this story is for you.
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