This makes me feel like I’m reading a never ending poem.
Honestly, the descriptiveness is so magical feeling and it really gets you
relaxed, but it starts out not feeling like a story but just a run-on of words.
In any case, I find this very well done. Very professional
and I hope to see it win the Watty awards. Things of improvement is the
chapters feel too long, too slow as well, they feel like they drag on forever
when reading. It’s a great style, to have and I’m not dissing it, I’m just
giving my personal opinion.
It’s an interesting plot and I recommend this to the reader
who is looking for a dreamy fantasy with heavy imagery and descriptiveness.
Very well written, very well done. Just not for me, but I wish the author luck
in their writing career.
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