I love this story. I enjoyed it and think it’s very cute.
Any girl should be able to relate this even a little. If you want a love
triangle romance… this is the story for you. the author does a very good job
and delivering this story. Very good descriptions along with letting her
readers feel the emotions her characters feel. I applaud the author’s natural
talent.
The negatives, the spelling and grammar needs work. Edit
before you update because you will be too busy writing the next chapter to go
back and edit the last. Trust me I learned that from experience.
This story reminds me way too much of the movie, Sweet Home
Alabama. I won’t ever accuse of it being a rip-off because sometimes it’s
coincidence. The author can make this into her own story. Other than that it’s
a great story and to the author, get a little more confidence…
No need to be asking your readers if it’s good or bad all
the time. They will review their honest opinion and when they do fix your
errors, don’t delete a story because everything you write can have potential.
This author has a talent to write romances, so I will be looking forward to
more from her.
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