Without a doubt this story keeps you guessing. That’s why
it’s great. Everything is up to par. A few spelling and grammatical errors, but
nothing of huge notice. It was actually impressive. Delivered well and I’m a
sucker for internet relationship romances, so I’m definitely hooked. For as
many times as this type of romance has been done, this story seems quite
original.
The negative is the consistency of chapters. I don’t care if
you do two pages or if you do five, just keep each chapter the same length if
you can. Doesn’t have to be exact, but don’t make one chapter extremely short
and the next extremely long, it will begin to annoy readers.
The author switches from different perspectives quite good,
also being in third person I find it impressive how the author keeps it clean
and clear. I love the quotes the author decides to put at the beginning of the
story. It’s a nice creative touch that puts readers in the mood to read that
chapter.
Overall I like this story, I look forward to how the plot
will unfold. I’d like to see pacing pick up— or make chapters longer. The story
is already in the fourth chapter and the plot hasn’t really gone anywhere.
Other than that, if you want an internet romance as much as I do… This is the
story for you.
Thank you so much for the nice review of my story. I really appreciate it!:))))
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