Nice summary to start off, the prologue is even more
amazing. I was a little disappointed when I found out this may be a, “vampire story”
but I read on because it is very well written so far, especially as far as
organization and plot go.
Turns out to be a vampire story… Not a vampire love story,
thank God, but nonetheless a vampire story. It may have been better if you
replace the vampires with the CIA or something. That’s just my personal opinion
of preferred genre nonetheless though. Some readers like vampire stories, some
don’t.
This story really keeps you reading whether you like it or
not. That’s the way a story needs to be. The tension in this story keeps
building up, keeps you wondering so much about what happened and what will
happen. I love that mysterious feeling when I am reading.
In any case I can say I love this story, only minor grammar
mistakes and the rest seems perfect, plot, pacing, detail. So if you’re looking
for a great action-fantasy-mystery about a psychic girl who has vampires after
her with a little romance thrown into the mix… This is the story for you.
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