This story will make you cry! The raw emotion this story has—
how the author portrays them is unbelievable. It really drags you into read
this story, the plot is pretty simple but it’s the descriptiveness and writing
ability that keeps me reading
Only fix there could be is some small spelling and grammar
errors. Nothing major, more like a slip of the finger to the wrong letter on
the keyboard. Give this story a quick edit and it is something the author
should be proud of.
I wish I could say I recommend this story to anyone, but
honestly it may not be something some readers can bare. If you can relate to
your family being murdered of some sort, than probably not for you if it will
only bring back the pain. Because even if you cannot relate, this story will
make you feel sad in the pit of your stomach.
Amazing how the author wrote this, I hope it is completely
fictional… I know these types of stories happen in real life, but I don’t know,
the way this was written is all to breath-taking, makes you read on in awe and
a cold sweat. It’s addicting for even though it is a tragedy… Look for the
romance ahead. The thing I like about this, moral of the story perhaps… it’s all
about, facing and healing from life’s troubles. We all have to do it whether we
like it or not. I highly recommend this story.
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